Short but sweet.
This story was strangely addictive. I loved the style and the plot, even if the general elements have been overdone in fiction. This story still stood out with it's passion and the growing characters. I liked the whole concept of Double Dare and would love to go on the adventure of a lifetimes myself! Swimming with manatees would definitely be up there, I thought it was very different.
There were a few spelling and grammatical errors in this, but they didn't ruin my enjoyment of the story and I barely noticed most of them - and it used to be my job to notice things like that. Most people will probably not notice them at all.